Einstein Sex-Play Hyper-Light
Yesterday after Trish left for work, I spent until 2:30 (+ or - a few minutes) working on my mutation of "Movement & Repose" into "Einstein Sex-Play Hyper-Light". I think that I may still be a little manic, but if I am, it's hypomania, not the more severe paranoia that caused me to write an angry email to this Bill Berry character over a nit-pick.
The words flowed smoothly & well. Although Ted made some invaluable contributions in terms of character & particle physics, the romance elements had to be eliminated -- 2 stories, running in tandem, one of which does not collapse without the science. The remake is thorough, & includes removing Juanita's obsession with religion & creating a new ending, then on to more & more rewrites. I want it to be near-perfect the next time it goes thru Critters. Then I'll do an MPC in order to have it on Stan's desk as soon as possible.
I did get another email from Jon Kohl yesterday, but Ted said not to listen to him, he got kicked out of some other workshop Ted's in. In the new draft, psi allows Juanita contact with the aliens, but I claimed it's cross-linked to schizophrenia, using the bio-origins of shamanism as a starting point. He claimed he'd "done a lot of research on psi, & it's not linked to schizophrenia". Nor, for that matter, if I remember correctly, did he believe that there are genes that control for it. However, since there's no scientific proof psi even exists, I see no problem here.
About 8:00 something, Dion called. We had a long conversation about his interest in SF & the writing I'm doing. He also said any time would be good for us to visit, but we do have to work it out around Rosemary's schedule & our March 7 appointment with Doc Larocque.
I see Boes today. Everything seems to be fine, but the Great Falls trip, there & back again, was pointless & merely stuck me with an $1,100 ambulance bill.
At least the meds are kicking in. When I became Kimothy Leery, which set it off, I mellowed out quickly.
That woman is dangerous. I think she's a Vadisystem.
The words flowed smoothly & well. Although Ted made some invaluable contributions in terms of character & particle physics, the romance elements had to be eliminated -- 2 stories, running in tandem, one of which does not collapse without the science. The remake is thorough, & includes removing Juanita's obsession with religion & creating a new ending, then on to more & more rewrites. I want it to be near-perfect the next time it goes thru Critters. Then I'll do an MPC in order to have it on Stan's desk as soon as possible.
I did get another email from Jon Kohl yesterday, but Ted said not to listen to him, he got kicked out of some other workshop Ted's in. In the new draft, psi allows Juanita contact with the aliens, but I claimed it's cross-linked to schizophrenia, using the bio-origins of shamanism as a starting point. He claimed he'd "done a lot of research on psi, & it's not linked to schizophrenia". Nor, for that matter, if I remember correctly, did he believe that there are genes that control for it. However, since there's no scientific proof psi even exists, I see no problem here.
About 8:00 something, Dion called. We had a long conversation about his interest in SF & the writing I'm doing. He also said any time would be good for us to visit, but we do have to work it out around Rosemary's schedule & our March 7 appointment with Doc Larocque.
I see Boes today. Everything seems to be fine, but the Great Falls trip, there & back again, was pointless & merely stuck me with an $1,100 ambulance bill.
At least the meds are kicking in. When I became Kimothy Leery, which set it off, I mellowed out quickly.
That woman is dangerous. I think she's a Vadisystem.
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